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Almost A Woman is a dramatic story

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Feb 12, 2009
by: maryamkhan

 Recently I read pages 1 to 30 in Almost a Women, by Esmeralda Santiago, and I think it's really a dramatic story because it's about a women who comes to the U.S and she has to face many porblems. She don't live with her husband and she has son and daughters.

One line from there I like that SHE DON'T CARE WHAT OTHERS DOING and I think its true don't copy the others do what you want to do.Decide what is good for you

Another that SOMETHING COULD HAPPEN TO YOU its means that she is worried about her children that she is very conscious about them and she think that her daughter is not mature and someone can easily deceive her

 What probably could happen I really can't write because its a typical to say that how she would manage herself but I am eager to read it because I think its a different and there is a lesson for our live that how should we take our steps in rainy day.

 

 

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Dear Maryam : I disliked

Submitted by MLuciano on Thu, 2009-03-05 15:46.

Dear Maryam :

I disliked your post, "Almost A Woman is a dramatic story" because... I feel like you didn't really get the start of the story. It was about one of the daugthers, not the mother.

One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: "I think its a different and there is a lesson for our live that how should we take our steps in rainy day." I think this is true because... even though times are hard, theres always a light at the end of the tunnel.

Thanks for your writing.