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Brain Twisting Poem

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Jan 5, 2009
by: ELashley

Top Notch
High above the rest
Yes I must confess
That you always treat me best
I was lost
Looking through
Then I finally found you
Knew what to do
And gave my heart to you
Then you came through
You did the same too
Smile to myself saying,
"Yupp, that's my boo!"
You, figured me out
Like a puzzle or a book
And you, always gave me that
Sweet little look
I just, laugh as I look back
Because I had mistook
You for, the one that had
Made me look like a doof
But uh, yeah that's over man
That was in my past
I can't, believe that I actually
Thought that it would last
Wow! That one month went by
Really, really, REALLY fast
WHAT?! I just made myself
Look like an ass
Ouch! My heart just stepped on a
Big ol' piece of glass
That what, I get for making
My heart oh so vast.
And now it's, stuck up in this
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Dear Elashley, I really like

Submitted by wofrancheska on Tue, 2009-01-06 13:11.

Dear Elashley,

I really like your poem I don't think its a brain twisting poem tho. Its more of a rhyming poem.

well...

Submitted by ELashley on Tue, 2009-01-06 21:26.

the only reason it is called Brain teasing Poem is because of the people who were/ thought they were involved... that's all but thank you for your comment :D