I am proud with your essay “Gary Lies "Because I loved the way you explain Gary life and when the was in school and details about the chapter.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is “Gary goes to church with Rick and Debra, sometimes. After a month or so Rick and Debra stop going to church every day.”I think it is a strong sentence is because when I was little I loved going to church and while I was going up I never went back to church.
Another sentence that I loved was “What I've noticed about Gary in this chapter is that he lies. He lies because Gary doesn’t go to church every Sunday.”This stood out for me because lying is not good choice to get away with thing like lying about coming home late or when you have a fight with your brother or sister and lie about who started.
Thanks for writing. I look forward to seeing why you write next, Because your writing is very interesting about the things you say in your essay.