Fight!

Discussion
May 9, 2016
by: odukuray

OUSMAN: 12 yrs old , student , who doesn’t tolerate bullying
Believes that fighting can’t fix anything. BOY: 13 yrs old , student , who likes bullying , believes that fighting can get him anywhere Rayshawn: 12 yrs old, student , believes fighting can solve problems,

Scene One

Ousman: Stop picking on me.
Boy: No.
Ousman: Ok whatever.
Boy:Do you want to fight.
Ousman:No because I am new and I don’t want to fight.
Boy: You scared that’s why.
Ousman: F you.
Boy: F you.
Ousman: Stay away from me unless you want a problem.
Boy:Make me.
Ousman: Ok you’ll see.
Boy:Shut up.
Ousman:You shut up.
Boy:You wanna fight.
Ousman:Just try me. Ousman: Stop picking on me.
Boy: No.
Ousman: Ok whatever.
Boy:Do you want to fight.
Ousman:No because I am new and I don’t want to fight.
Boy: You scared that’s why.
Ousman: F you.
Boy: F you.
Ousman: Stay away from me unless you want a problem.
Boy:Make me.
Ousman: Ok you’ll see.
Boy:Shut up.
Ousman:You shut up.
Boy:You wanna fight.
Ousman:Just try me.

Scene Two

Rayshawn: What’s up.
Ousman: Yea what’s up bro.
Rayshawn: Yo what's been bugging you
Ousman:There's one guy I don't want to fight but he keeps testing me.
Rayshawn: Then you should fight bro.
Ousman: Nah bro if I fight I can get suspended.
Rayshawn:So if you want him to stop bothering you fight him.
Ousman: If it has to come to that.
Rayshawn: Yea if you beat him up he won't mess with you anymore.
Ousman:Yea I know that.
Rayshawn: Yea.
Ousman: So how's it been.
Rayshawn: Am good bro and you.
Ousman: Am good.
Rayshawn: Alright catch you later.
Ousman: Yea see you later.

Scene Three

Ousman: Hey you.
Boy: Who me ?
Ousman: Yea.
Boy: What you want ?
Ousman: Today after school lets fight.
Boy: You wanna fight me ?
Ousman: Yea because you keep messing with me.
Boy: Okay if you want to fight lets fight.
Ousman: Yea lets fight after school at 3:00 pm.
Boy: Ok I am ready.
Ousman: Yea meet me near the staircase.
Boy: Ok.
Ousman: Today I am going to beat you down.
Boy: Ok lets see.

Comments

hi

Submitted by tjackson on Tue, 2016-05-24 10:30.

I am happy about your post, because you gave funny details when u said stop picking on me and he said stop picking on me and he said make me and when he said so fight him and he said no because it made it seem like he was scared.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is when he said "yea meet me by the staircase".I think this is good because it shows he was not afraid anymore and they were going to fight.Another sentence that i liked was"no because i am new and i dont want to fight."This stood out for me because it show that he is a good student and does not like to get in trouble.Your essay reminds me of something that happened to me.One time

I am glad you liked it

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Submitted by odukuray on Wed, 2016-06-08 11:48.

I am glad you liked it