Dreams

Dear, Lenonardh

Your post caught my attentions because every one has dreams. Just like you i dream to be a Star some day . I would like to be a singer/fashion icon/ actor . A line that caught my attention is " visions of a penthouse & a model living comfy " . I really liked that line because i like the fact that you can in-vision your self in your dream house with your dream girl . Great poem keep dreaming !

This post was interesting to me because it was about dreams, but we all pretty much have the same dream about getting money, that will never change. The part in the poem that caught me was "What comes around goes around ,they calling me the turnstile. i liked how u compared that

Dear Leonard,
I like your poem "Dreams" because it proves how you so motivated in making it big and your not scared to make it to the top, even when people hate on you.

One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is when you said "What comes around goes around". I think this is true because what ever you done in the past will come back and haunt you in the present or future.

Your poem reminds me of something that happen to me when i was going through a rough time and I wanted to make it big and i didn't care of people talking spac, I just did me and that's it.

Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because you sound like a very outspoken person and isn't scared to make it all the way.

Dear Leonard:

I agree with your poem. “Dreams” Is interesting because when the people see you that you are rich they hate you. The people are so hater, and they don’t talk to you because they see that you are rich. The people most to see who are the people not what they have. For example money the people only for the money.
One sentence you wrote stands out for me is. “Got dreams of been the greatest you go put me on play list, and bump me in hears like you do these rappers out now. What comes around goes.” I am agreeing because the rapper that because they are famous the other people cannot be like them I thinks that the rappers are selfish.
Another sentence that I find interested is “I made my life a rap so that mean boy hungry
Visions of the penthouse and a model living comfy.’’ I am totally agreed because the life of the rappers is too danger they smoke, and they don’t say it when they get famous they say it, and I got dream to be actor.
This remind of my life. When one day I go to Jennifer Lopez concert, and she don’t even hear me I get mad because she is my favorite singer. I don’t care if she doesn’t see me or hear me in the concert because she still is my favorite singer. I love her song I want to be like her but not singing acting that is my passion to acting.
Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next. Because I like your poem is the best one I read in youth voices I hope more poem about you I like it see you next time.

Dear Leonardh

Your post, “dreams” was well written. I like how the voice was recorded and not only that the way you written it. Your rap goes along with me because someday I wanna be successful and live my dreams. One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is “Living on the top, They gon’ hate, they gon’ stare, Put my money in my head. I agree with this quote because once we on our path to success people gonna watch and hate. But we just need to live past that and do what we have to do . I like how your post was realistic.

Another sentence you wrote that stood out for me is “What comes around goes around,They calling me the turnstile. I enjoy reading this quote because its true karma can come back hard. If you chose the right journey, that what you will get in return success. It doesn't just happens , it's a goal which come with obstacle we have to face. I believe you want to make your dreams come true. My advice is follow your goal and keep on doing what you do best, don't let anyone tell you wrong from right.

Your post inspired me to become a successful person in life. In order to live my dreams I need to hold to it very close and tightly. I won't let no one let me fall because they just be define as hater who want to be in my position.

Thanks for your writing, I look forward to what you write next. I really enjoy hearing the voice and description on your post.

Dear Leonard:

I enjoyed reading your poem, "Dreams." This poem was very nice, and I could relate it to a lot.

One sentence you wrote that out for me is: "Living on the top They gon’ hate, they gon’ stare." I think this is interesting because people are always judging, no matter what the situation is. Another sentence that I liked was: "Got dreams of bein the greatest You gon’ put me on ya playlist." This stood out for me because it reminded me of a friend of mine.

Your poem reminds me of a close friend of mine. He is determined to be a rapper and he never gives up. He has big dreams and everyone loves his music. He’s a good rapper, and I think he’ll make it somewhere.

Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because this was very interesting and nice. I love poetry.

I thought your post was very creative. We all have dreams and it is up to us to work hard and achieve them, whatever they may be. I like the lines "Got dreams of bein the greatest, you gon' put me on ya playlist" I think that is really catchy and really true. I hope that you achieve your dreams and I will definitely put you on my playlist!