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Entangled

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May 4, 2011
by: Dtan

Sun beating on the fruitful seedling

Mounted on The Earth entangled in the dirt

Chives so long but yet so strong

Parsely so bright not even afraid of the night

Weather so cold they could put up a fight

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Interesting poem

Submitted by 16shenw on Wed, 2011-05-04 19:13.

This poem is a interesting, and great poem. It is very detailed with little amount of words to describe what you want to say. I like the way you had descibed the things the seed does with the sun, earth, night, and weather. This makes me think more about what the seed is doing, other than it is just an ordinary seed that is growing to be a plant.