Entangled
Sun beating on the fruitful seedling
Mounted on The Earth entangled in the dirt
Chives so long but yet so strong
Parsely so bright not even afraid of the night
Weather so cold they could put up a fight
Sun beating on the fruitful seedling
Mounted on The Earth entangled in the dirt
Chives so long but yet so strong
Parsely so bright not even afraid of the night
Weather so cold they could put up a fight
Comments
Interesting poem
This poem is a interesting, and great poem. It is very detailed with little amount of words to describe what you want to say. I like the way you had descibed the things the seed does with the sun, earth, night, and weather. This makes me think more about what the seed is doing, other than it is just an ordinary seed that is growing to be a plant.