Feel it in the Air

Dear Kadeemk this was a Great piece of work you've put up hear on YouthVoices, i really Enjoyed it, Think you should keep up the Good work.

Dear Kadeem, This is a great piece of writing. I would not be lying to you when i say you got talent and potential. I feel you should pursue this dream if you want to take it seriously, wether you want to leave it as poems or put the words to a beat.

Dear Kadeem,
I read your post, "Feel it in the air," because I really liked your poem. I didn't think you had it in you lmao. I like it though.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is "My mom keeps telling me to stay out the streets". I think this is true. You NEED to stay out the streets. And from what you told me before about your ex girl (lol) choose wisely who you date :/.

Dear Kadeem

i felt your poem "feel it in the air" was to deep.

i loved your poem and it was really interesting and easy to relate to it stood out to me the way you put words together and made things look different in a new light

"I still gaze at the sky and wonder where I'll be I still lay in my bed and wonder when I'll sleep"

this quote is exactly how i feel at the this time in my life because things are changing and sometimes i wonder where I'm going to end up and how are other people able to sleep when there are so many things in life to think about.

"Trying to live for the day ain't worried about the past"

this quote is how i live life daily because you never know what can happen before the days over or if your going to see tomorrow.

Dear Kadeem :

I really enjoyed reading your poem “ Feel it in the Air “. Your poem stands out and no lie you have such great imagery that can reflect to what is going on in your life.I know sometimes we don't wish things to go down the way it does but to be honest that’s the life people decide to go threw.

One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is “But it ain’t your problems it’s mines”.
This sentence is actually so true and it goes out to those other’s that judge and be all up in your life. I hate when people tell me the difference between my rights and my wrongs. Its like i have no other choice but to do what i think its right and maybe my right is other’s wrong.

Another sentence that caught my attention was “My moms keeps telling me stay out the streets”. This sentence stood out for me because its so true no mother would desire nothing but the best for you and the streets sometimes bring up to no good in one way or another.

I do agree with you that their is violence out their and majority is for getting respect and protecting whats yours. Maybe VIOLENCE is not that way of earning respect but people make it hard and make VIOLENCE a solution to that.

Thanks for your writing. I look foward to seeing what your write next because you have so much potential and i love the way you express your emotions. Its just reality and you speak it the way it is . REAL TALK #