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A Flower

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May 13, 2011
by: mshah
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A Yellow and Green Flower

Yellow and Green buried into the ground,
When I passed by it felt like the flower will never ever stop growing.
Standing tall like the Eiffel tower, shinning into sun is the yellow flower.
I felt the green petal of the  flower,
the yellow petals of the flower were shinning like the sun on my eyes.
It'll stand tall like the big wall, it'll shine into the sun,
will be the Green and Yellow bloom.

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Submitted by rgoodman on Mon, 2011-05-16 12:32.

Dear Asim,

Thanks for this poem about the yellow and green pedal flowers. I really like the way you used the smile in the second stanza of the poem. This sentence shows how bright the yellow and green pedal flowers were.