How well am I doing
The thing that makes a youth voices post really interesting is that you have an opening statement that grabs the readers eyes and that will make them read on and also that you stay in the subject that your talking about and that you include some kind of picture or image that you might find interesting and that also the readers that you are trying to attract might find interesting of your post. Do I care about this yes I do because it affects my grade whether I do it or not so I do have to take some interesting in doing it.
I been writing about this marking period is killing and been sending them to Mr. Allison does he read them no I bet he doesn't and I send them to him for the soul purpose for him to read what I write fix my grammers and so I can pass his class but he doesn't care. I been posting about the way people killing and why they do it in the first place what leads them to commit murders in the first place. people have commented on my post and I comment on the post when I like or have an interest but basically that it if i don't have an interest i
the post than i won't comment on it.
My three best what's up that I like would have to be about mapping main street also la llorona um about the best friend stories and how would that affect leaving my best friends behind and finding new ones like them.The ones that I have commented on have been the ones that have caught my eye and I liked a lot.I like the most about cyber bullying also cult leaders and the one about my ancient chinese project where I talked about the new inventions those where my favorite out of all of them.
Nine Best Posts
http://youthvoices.net/node/26578 this is my favorite because I liked the book and for the first them I even asked questions about the book and I also like the way I expressed my self in this youth voices post.
http://youthvoices.net/node/26643 I like this one because it was my first essay that I did for his class and I was very proud of myself and also that its a topic that I have a lot of interest in and that I want to major in.
http://youthvoices.net/node/27565 this is my favorite one also because many don't know what cyber- bullying is and the affects that it has on people and also because many people dont know that there is cyber-bullying or that's happening around us everyday.
http://youthvoices.net/node/28660 I like this because many have heard of urban legends and also that many believe in it so when I read about this urban legend in particular it caught my eye.
I hope to do next on youth voices is about DUI and also about human trafficking and why people are doing those are my other two works I am going to do for my discussion forum, I am also planning to do drugs and the affects on people and how it makes them what they don't want to do at that certain time. I might also do peer pressure and the consequences on children also steps to overcome it and say no to things. I might also do bullying and how it has affected people that get bully can someone being bully be taken to the point of killing so that's my work for the next marking period that I am planning to do.
The difference between writing on paper and blogging is that writing on paper is just killing tree and also that you will lost it and also that since people are using the computer now a days its much easier. pictures are better because you can see what people are talking about or feeling through a simple picture like people say a picture describes a million words.