Jojo's Tale
I created the Scratch animation Jojo’s Tale as my response to a project to create an interactive ethical story. An ethical story is a certain type of story in which the character, or the person controlling the character makes one or more decisions that affect the outcome of the rest of the story.
My story is about a little monkey named Jojo who wants to play with his friends by crocodile nile. his mother tells him not to and sends him to play with his cousin Tim. Jojo gets bored and goes to watch his friends play by crocodile Nile. They tease him a lot about not wanting to swing across.The character chooses whether or not to swing across the Nile, if he does then he gets hurt by a crocodile and abandoned by his mom, if he doesn’t then he gets praised by his friends for foreseeing the tree wasn’t going to work correctly.
My story was inspired by my imagination. I decided that I wanted the characters to be monkeys, and the rest of the story seemed to come together and fit into place.
I think I was unsuccessful in creating my story because it seemed to fulfill all of the requirements. My story was three minutes long, the character controls the outcome of the story, it if appropriate for children up to the age of 13, I have two distinct endings and I give credit to each of the pictures that I took from the Internet. The only problem was that when it was uploaded it worked, bu now, it doesn't work.
Comments
I like that your story
I like that your story contained a lot of audio that made it really seem like a storybook tale. I could really feel the emotion of sadness of JoJo and the sterness of the mom. I also really liked the backgrounds. I thought they were creative. I noticed the glitch you mentioned in your description. Maybe you should double-check before uploading. The choices in your ethical dillema were clear. They really seemed tempting in my opinion!
Overall, well done.
this is great I really liked
this is great I really liked it. It fit everything right.
I liked the voices that you
I liked the voices that you added in your story because it made the whole thing more enjoyable.
I noticed the part where you talked about the animation not working, so i wasn't able to play the whole story.
The ethical dilemma in your story in your story was nice because it tells you that you should listen to people, especially your mom, who gives you good advice.
Hey, I really liked the way
Hey, I really liked the way you added different backgrounds and voices to your animation to make it look cooler. However, I noticed that the animation stopped at some point. I did not understand the ethical dilemma due to technical difficulties.
I liked that your story
I liked that your story contained audio and it made it funny and more enjoyable to watch. I especially love the narration with the accent. It sounded like one of those people who go explore in the jungle, which was fitting for this animation. I think that maybe there was a glitch because after Tim won the chess game the animation stopped. So I think you should try to fix that then repost the video. But the part that I was able to see seemed to be very well made.
I enjoyed this story and it
I enjoyed this story and it was pretty funny. I liked how you added dialogue with audio and I thought the ethical lesson was pretty important. I think one problem was that I had to go on scratch and download it to work, and there were still problems. Everything else was pretty cool.