Dear Alex G. :
I enjoyed your essay, "Make us Proud, Mr. President". You carried your thoughts out well and explained your thoughts on the economy thoroughly. I really like reading your ideas and thoughts on our countries economy.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: "You are a leader of this country. Someone chose to check that small box next to your name so you could lead this country for a reason. The people who elected you believed you had the ethics, values, drive and now the power to make a difference. Make this country proud." I really liked this quote, it really got your views across.
Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next. I found your essay interesting, thorough and well written.