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Nothin Last for Ever

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Oct 27, 2010
by: JailineJ
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Nothing last
forever
it up
Drink it
down
Laugh it
off
Avoid the
BS
Take choices & never have
regrets    
Because at
one point everything you did was excatly wat you WANTED

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 Dear Jailine J: I

Submitted by CFlores on Wed, 2010-10-27 20:53.

 Dear Jailine J:

I liked your poem, "Nothing Last for Ever" because it is very powerful in its message. I agree with the whole point of this poem and its mission to express how nothing lasts for ever. It may be a small poem, but length doesn't really matter to me. What I care most about the poem is how strong it is, when it comes to the message that it expresses.

One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is the title: "Nothing last forever" I think this is unique because I like the whole idea and theme that the poem proposes to the readers. I can sense the whole creativity flowing through a poem. It doesn't matter what type of poem is written, what matters is the deep message within. 

Another sentence that I liked was: "Drink it down, laugh it off" This stood out for me because it was very straight forward and that sent a very strong message to me. This quote expressed how things that don't go well should not be cared for or worried about. I also agree with this quote because it firmly explains that things in life don't happen all the time, but when they do, people should make the best out of it.

Your poem reminds me of something that relates to me. I love poetry, it is a passion. My poems are always unique and I like to make sure that they get the point across in an indirect way, that not most would understand. Unlike me, you wrote this poem with a message so stern it was clear to understand.

Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because we can share our poetry amongst each others and it would be very interesting. I want to read more pieces of you poetry and see if there are poems which vary in the way they were written. It would be great if you can post more, and if you already have some then please let me know.

 

well thank you and i wrote

Submitted by JailineJ on Mon, 2010-11-01 17:48.

well thank you and i wrote more poems i dont know if you might like them.

 I really do like this

Submitted by kwilliams2 on Wed, 2010-10-27 21:49.

 I really do like this post. I think the message it gives really is something people need to listen to and take into their everyday lives. So many people focus on the negative. We as people allow ourselves to get so wrapped up in life's problems, the tests we have to take, the jobs we have to do, the stress of the day, of the week that we don't allow ourselves to sit back enough if at all to reflect on the positive. We don't allow ourselves to complement ourselves or to show that we've done something right. 

Also, I did like the line: "Take choices & never have

regrets     

Because at
one point everything you did was excatly wat you WANTED"

No one likes to take chances because no one likes what they don't understand. I guess it's just naturally to shy away from things we don't like and to stay where everything is familar and comfortable. We need to break barriers, to stand up for what we believe in and to do what will truly make us happy. If not, we'll all be unhappy and boring. The world is boring enough as it is. 

 

I like the way you made the

Submitted by EBCHS 18 on Tue, 2010-11-16 11:33.

I like the way you made the poem. You can tell nothing last forever. The part that stands out to me is

"Laugh it

off

Avoid the

BS"

It's like you telling them to just keep moving. Dont pay it it no mind, and move on with your life. It stands out to me.