One of Juan's songs

Discussion
May 28, 2009
by: jlima

This is one of my songs that wrote and I want to start a metal core christian band.

I feel helpless in this conversation
so let me out of this!
I was to scared to reveal what I truly am!
Just save me from this horror
I'm looking at every direction trying to find my real path
I'm so cold, I want your warmth
I cry, I want to see your face tonight

Bleeding through, wanting to find my healer, my aid!
Choking on nothing
Maybe I should stop holding my breath
Falling and getting up, its the time for me to make a stand
Hold on to your DOCTRINES
Hold on to your FAITH!
I want to find a shortcut
I don't want to go through this

Oh God come down from your throne
Work your way through
Its funny how i fall to my knees and but you never answer
But I'm not giving up
I'm done drowning

Comments

0.0 wow really nice poem, I

Submitted by CFlores on Thu, 2009-05-28 16:38.

0.0 wow really nice poem, I thought it was really powerful the way you describe God and his connection with you. What I liked most about it was that, it's not really like lyrics you would find nowadays in songs, but that's a good thing because uniqueness is really awesome. I like the words that you use, and with lyrics like this, I'm sure you'll make a perfect metal core christian band. Good JOB!!!!!...Keep working hard and fulfill your dream =D

yea man like yooooo son you

Submitted by jlima on Fri, 2009-06-12 10:50.

yea man like yooooo son you right