The Opposites of Life
Life can be given or life can be taken
Life can be building or life can be breaking
You can live life rushing or live life patient
You can be God's child or the angel of Satan
Since life can be given as well as taken
Build your life up before it starts breaking
Don't always rush sometimes be patient
And pick your path wise, you with God or with Satan?
Comments
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dear kiseem
I strongly agree with you on this poem you have wrote. most people are killing others and being killed. i look up to god because he's the one that is looking over us and not under us.
One sentences that stood out for me in your poem was "Since life can be given as well as taken Build your life up before it starts breaking".
I find this true because once your life starts breaking apart your personality change also the people around you that why is always good too be happy and thank god for what we have.
another sentences that stood out for me was when you mentioned don't always rush into things be patient. being patient is the most important thing you need to do if you wanna accomplish something. when you rush threw thing you tend to miss out on some steps. and other important stuff.
Its good that you showed everyone how seriously it is to die and to become somebody. most of all you mentioned about being patient and stop rushing .
I will be gladly to read one of your posts again so i can relate to it also comment on facts.