Quake Story Response

May 5, 2011
by: CFlores

I loved Jamie’s essay, “My Song 5,” from Youthvoices
because it was very interesting and I liked how you incorporated music
to express a story. It felt very surreal and thoroughly conveyed its
message. At the same time, the song was very suspenseful.

One sentence Machini wrote that stands out for me is: “


Dear Christian,   Really? You

Submitted by khassan on Mon, 2011-05-09 08:51.

Dear Christian,


Really? You liked that? I liked the narration that he did, i admit, but the piano ruined the entire thing. It was like a random banging on the piano, and it hurt my ears still.