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The Race

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Sep 15, 2010
by: jacksone

Bang! The race began with a shot of impulse to sprint. Hundreds of runners move forward,and he pushed, elbowed, even grabbed, to get ahead. The course bottle necks. Kids stop, kids get trampled, but he was strong and determined to get the lead. All he wanted was the finish.

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 minisaga...

Submitted by cropner on Wed, 2010-09-15 14:24.

 minisaga... classic. 

good job of showing the emotion 

 Jackson, I wonder if this

Submitted by M. Pell on Wed, 2010-09-15 14:47.

 Jackson,

I wonder if this post has anything to do with a certain race that is run in Murray City Park?  Haha good times with XC.  Good job getting the basic emotions of the race down in so few words.  It would be cool to see one of these after every race.  Maybe you could even add a translation for our favorite South African coach.