Reducing Crime in America

 Dear Andrew,

       I really believe in everything you said in your letter How do we reduce crime in America? This letter is both persuasive and strong. I really enjoyed reading this letter partially because crime is such a big cause of deaths in our life. Many people are greedy and need money so they will break into banks and commit murder to get the money they need. A lot of people also steal things from places and will shoot at people for no reason at all. People commit crimes for many reasons and I think we can really work together to stop crime everywhere.