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Mar 9, 2010

It might snow tonight! I hope it snows a lot tonight so that we get off tomorrow from school. I don't wanna come to school. I think two weeks ago we got a snow day and it was great. But the next day when it was disgusting outside we had school. I didn't come to school but a lot of other people did. I don't like snow because it gets slippery outside and we have to be care full when we walk. But other then that its much better then rain sometimes.

One thing that's hard about this topic is that its something I want. I always get lost when we do this thing because a lot of things come in my mind and my writing just becomes a jumble of thoughts. And it doesn't make any sense to me later on.

I don't have any gut reacting to this thing. My teacher asked me what was in my mind and SNOW was in my mind because that was the fist thing I heard this morning. WHY DONT WE GET SNOW DAYS MORE OFTEN ??? I came to NY in 2004 and this year I got my first snow day. Last year it didn't snow at all and this year there's a lot of snow. One thing I like about snow is that fresh snow looks beautiful outside. But then when they start to clean it, it looks disgusting.

So last Friday we got our second snow day. That gave us a three day weekend which was wonderful. Getting snow days is great but then all that is getting annoying now. I mean getting snow day is great but after words we can't really do much because there is a lot of disgusting snow outside.

Sp this essay/writing doesn't make any sense to me. I'm not even sure if its a essay it was the topic that poped in my head when Mr.Allison asked us to write about whatever was in our minds.

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Hey lol This essay thing was

Submitted by djones on Thu, 2010-03-11 10:10.

Hey lol

This essay thing was so jumbled but I like that you compared to all the other people wrote about what you felt as supposed to one sole topic. I could really tell that you were trying to stay true to who you are while you were writing as supposed to conforming to one thing Mr. Allison would have expected.

I totally wish it would snow again too and we could get out of school but if you think about it this way when you count up all the school days we have off and the fact that the seniors basically dont have to be here for almost the whole month of june then we only have a month and a few days left of school. So cheer up old chap =)