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Summer's Twin Haiku

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May 13, 2011
by: PHuang

Summer's newbourn twins.
Be the essence of Nature.
Soon to be murdered.

 

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wo bu xi huan ni

Submitted by snakashima on Fri, 2011-05-13 08:53.

Dear PHuang,

     Thanks for this haiku about two flowers. I really like how it is short, so I don't have to read much. I liked how it was three lines, all of these lines not even adding up to a sentence if put into that form. The picture you put up looks nice, it makes the garden look good.

 

     I did some research into these flowers, and I found that this flower is called a red flower. First, there were two flowers, they both have colors. The color is red, which is why I concluded that this is a red flower. I do not particularly enjoy writing or researching about flowers, but I'm sure people wouldn't really care for what a flower is called.

 

     There seems to be some evidence that this flower is grown from dirt. Also, it grew from a seed. You need to water the flower in order for it to grow. "A flower must be catered to often in order for a pleasant and healthy plant to decorate and brighten your home." This quote shows that a flower does need to be taken care of. Watering the plant, as well as planting it in proper areas is a good way for a plant to flourish.

 

     All of this inspires me to write a haiku in response to yours. Since haikus are short and easy, I can do one without going crazy. I appreciate what you wrote.

Dear Phil,   I found out what

Submitted by khassan on Wed, 2011-05-18 08:51.

Dear Phil,

 

I found out what this plant is. It is a red tulip, although you could figure that out just by looking at it! They're not too much to say about your flower, to be honest. um... Interesting fact: some tulips contract a virus, called the Tulip Black Virus. It causes wilting and rotting, but it gives it a really cool color to it!