Treatment of Sex Offenders
My research topic is the treatment of sex offenders. I’m interested in this topic because the other day I looked up how many sex offenders lived around my area, and I was amazed on how many showed up. I wanted to know how they got treated while they were in jail and what was the process of it. So far I already knew what they had to register themselves as sex offenders. I also found out that they get special therapy, but I want to know what do the councillors say to help them. I think sex offenders should be given special therapy to help them realize what they did was wrong and how they can improve on being a better person.
I’ve done a lot of research on my topic about sex offenders’ treatment. I found out that the majority of sex offenders admit to what they have done versus people who don’t admit what they have done. I found this really interesting because I would think there would be more people not to admit it, so they won’t be in jail. Something that I also found interesting was the U.S wasn’t considering having registered sex offenders until a case in Washington occured. I’ve learned that sex offenders get treated based on their age and degree of sex assualt. I hope to find out the sex offenders point of view.
Finding reliable sources for this topic wasn’t what I expected. I was hoping to find articles on the very first page on Google Scholar, but I had to read a lot of articles to get what I wanted. Doing a research paper takes a lot of work, dedication, and TIME. I’ve realized that rushing through a research paper isn’t the best way to go. I’m trying to my best to make this a good paper. I can’t wait until I give in this paper. It would take a lot of weight off my shoulders. I would feel like I’ve accomplished something that I’ve worked so hard on. It’s kind of a good feeling.

Comments
Big challenges
You've chosen to work on a pretty specific topic, and I think that will help you to write a strong paper, but I also think it has presented you with some good challenges, too. I know you've worked hard on pulling this together, and I'm really looking forward to reading the final product of your work.
Aren't those maps with the sex offenders listings so weird? It definitely freaks me out a little bit to see such a disturbing public record.
Keep up the good work!