Trust Me

Hey Grey i really liked your poem "Trust Me", because come to think of it i would have never guessed you meant this to someone close to you if i would have not known. I like this poem because it is very attractive, well you know what i mean. Also i liked how i can really relate to the message that the poem is actually giving out or better yet explaining.

One sentence that you wrote that stands out for me is: What is it about me that makes you feel special. This stood out for me because it makes sense when sometimes you wonder why your parents always push you to strive hard when it comes to school and stuff. I think that most people can relate to the sentence.
 

Another sentence that i loved was: Sometimes I just want to run and let go. This stood out for me because i think it is true. When it comes to parents sometimes you do feel like running away from all the pressure that sometimes they put you through and makes you want to let go for everything.
 

Your story reminds me of tha same things that i go through. My parents sometimes put me through a lot of pressure and i make sure i do things the right way. I can be harsh on myself sometimes and put myself down, but i know that my parents love me too much to just let me sink in the pressure.

Thanks for writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because we can relate to topics like this one. I really liked how you expressed yourself and your feelings to public. Through poetry i find a way where i can just let myself go and write to an extent where i show my feelings. I think this is a great opportunity to get to know you a little better =)

   Dear Greyson,

   I loved your message, "Trust Me" because I really loved your title. It stood out for me so I started reading it and it caught my eyes and everything. Trust to me is really important, without trust no one would be able to tell you to do anything. When I have a best friend and when I make friends I look at them and see if they have trust. I love people that I trust and that wont backstab me in the back.

   One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: "What is it about me that makes you feel special". I think this is important because everyone is special in there own way. I dont think I am special at all, but my lover Hiba thinks I am special and she is really special to me too. She is my life. I never want to lose her!! She always says to me that I am special and I think to myself what makes me so special and everything. I always tell her that she is special too and she says "No" and everything, but yeah SHE IS SPECIAL!! She is the whole world to me and I love her so muchh!!

   Another sentence I liked was: "Sometimes I just want to run and let go". This stood out for me because when I am in pain or when I am said I just want to run away and let it go and enjoy myself in freedom and realease all the pain inside of me, outside. When I am sad and upset I just want to be alone and stuff and I dont want anyone to bother me. I just want to release my pain by going somewhere far and sit someone where it is quiet and think to myself and everything. That is the way that helps me cheer up and everything. I LOVE TO BE ALONE AT TIMES!!

   Your story reminds me of something that happened to me. One time I felt like not coming back home one day because I was really pissed and everything. I didnt want to go home because it is always noisy at home and I just wanted to be alone somewhere quiet and peaceful where I can think and realease all my pain and anger away, so I went to Manhattan. I was able to think and everything and get the pain away. SO WHEN YOU ARE IN PAIN and upset you should go to a quiet place and think to youself and do everything that you can to release it.

   Thanks for writing. I look foward to seeing what you write next, because I really loved your poem. Your poem really stood out for me and it made me think about a lot of things and made me realize a lot of things as well. I want to see what other poems you write and I see that your a person that loves to write poems. WRITE MORE POEMS!!

Dear Grey:

I am interested with your poem "Trust Me," because I would like to write a post about trust. I really enjoyed the poem, and I loved the way the poem was written.

One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: "I know I can do better" I think this is really nice because I would of love for someone to say that to me if they break our trust. I like this quote because its meaning that that person would try so hard for me to gain his/her trust back.

Another sentence that I enjoyed was: "I'm gone for now." This stood out for me because if someone breaks our trust we would all love for that person to change. This stood out for me because we would all wish to trust that certain person again.

I do strongly agree with you that we should forgive that person at least once. One reason I say this is because sometimes we might do, or say thing without thinking. Another reason I agree with you is because we all make mistakes, and we all deserve a second chance.

Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because I enjoyed your poem. I really loved the way you expressed your feeling to it. I would like to see what your next poem would be about because I really liked the way you wrote this one.