What is good writing? My Reflections
Everyone's writing can show their thoughts. Good writing should make a perfect start, and it also should have a perfect end. I would like see writing with good topics that I am very interested in. Good writing should have good topics to immediately catch the readers eye, then reader has to comment. That is very important for us, because if we don't see a topic that we are interested in, we also are not able to read it. Usually when I'm reading books that I want to read, it must be book that would have images about something. Good writing can make me feel in my brain, like shame or pity.
My experience on Youth Voices has been wonderful. I have not been a good writer, but i try to write something. I really want to say and want to share with someone. Even if it might be boring, but i still want to say. Some writing is assigned. So I don't have choices. For me, I would pick a topic that i think is different with other ones, then I will write. And other great thing is that I have been trying to make them comprehensible and articulate. I try do my best I can, that can be good for me and the reader.
I just hope to make more posts and do something else that relates to my to topic and what i am interested in. Usually i don't read other people's essays very often, but i do try to read. I really liked Mr. Lu Hsun's short story, because i can learn lots of things from his story.
It can teache how to be a person. Although they lived in old society and seen many forces of darkness. But they aren't even afraid of things. In the Old China, if you write or talk something, such as blame the government, it might be that you die. So I pretty much want to read Mr. Lu Hsun's story. I feel i was learning so much from his story. I would like to read thinkers essays or poets, whether it be sad or happy.
Some essays let us be sad or happy after we finish reading it. No matter, what it is. No matter, what thoughts are in it. That also is an experience for you to see. There are nothing for your to be worry about in an essay. It still has its original taste on it. Don't care about who's the author. No matter what languages does he speak, no matter what countries does he come from, if you like his knowledge works, please support him!

Comments
Dear Hchen Well you said
Dear Hchen Well you said that you are interested in good essays and such so you should take a look at some of my posts. I have a myriad of them but i hardly get comments due to the fact that they are a bit up there. Even though I am doing it more for the grade, i feel that my time is emaciated because i put so much up and i get no response. To comment on your "shame or pity" sentence. I can totally relate,sometimes i read an essay and I dislike everything about it. Shame or pity is not what i feel though, it is more of a listless feeling. Most essays that i read on here are so lethargic and cliche. Most people use so many facts in there essay that it becomes tedious and mundane to read it. I use my own opinions completely in my essays and I let my readers look at everything from a moral standpoint. I am on the philosophical side, my essays are clairvoyant. I love commenting on other peoples post because even though I get no response, people understand me a bit more. People like me are extremely rare and so that makes it hard for me to find other friends and such. You are definitely right about gaining an experience from reading other peoples comments even if you do not like it. Experiences are gained all the time. It does not matter whether you have done it before or not, if your doing it, your experiencing it and that is the simple truth. Anyways, I loved your post. I hope to see more of your work. thank you.
Very well written
Very well written discussions HChen, I will be looking to see what you will write next.