What If Poem

Dear Jessica:

I actually liked your poem because it aws short, sweet, and had meaning to it. I also liked the picture you added to it. It made me think :)

I liked your lines: "What if I was smarter than a average kid suppose to be, I might be in college right now," because it's something that everyone thinks about at some time in their life now. Everyone wants to be really smart and skip ahead of just move up with no problem at all.

I also liked your last line: "What if all of these things could be done," it was an interesting last thought to a string of wishes. It also leaves the reader thinking of more things they would like to do, more "What If's" to contemplate.

Your poem was very nice, I enjoyed it and it made me smile =] Keep up the good work hun.

Smiles <3

Jessica,
Your poem makes you think about all of the "What If"s in life. This was a well written piece that explains all of the questions we could have in intelligence, health, productiveness, and technology. It makes you think of all the things that could have been done, but without all the hard work we must put into everything, our world wouldn't be as it is today. Great job!