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White Teddy, Red Ribbon

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May 5, 2011
by: wng

White teddy bear, hanging by the tree
hanging proud and tall
Red ribbon around its neck,
black nose with black eyes.

One day however, it will wither,
hanging on the tree,
black as the coal you get during Christmas
bugs flying around it, playing tag
Red ribbon hanging by a thread,
White teddy bear, turn to black.

TeddyTeddyTeddy

Comments

Simply Meaningful

Submitted by 16chungk on Sun, 2011-05-08 23:37.

Though the poem is simple and short, it seems to be very meaningful. It describes and expresses the loneliness that an abandoned teddy bear feels, and it's very emotional with the descriptions of the doll from when it's new to when it would wither and die out. 

Simply Meaningful

Submitted by 16chungk on Sun, 2011-05-08 23:37.

Though the poem is simple and short, it seems to be very meaningful. It describes and expresses the loneliness that an abandoned teddy bear feels, and it's very emotional with the descriptions of the doll from when it's new to when it would wither and die out. 

Simply Meaningful

Submitted by 16chungk on Sun, 2011-05-08 23:38.

Though the poem is simple and short, it seems to be very meaningful. It describes and expresses the loneliness that an abandoned teddy bear feels, and it's very emotional with the descriptions of the doll from when it's new to when it would wither and die out.