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Who am I?

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Oct 25, 2011
by: KyshellF
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Who am I?

 

My real name is Kyshell F.

Yesterday my name was sister , key

Today my name is Mrs.F

Tomorrow my name will be Kyshell , shelly

In my dreams my name is _______

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This is very creative ,

Submitted by krystalm on Wed, 2011-10-26 11:07.

This is very creative , thoughtful, and very much written with your mind (heart.) When i was reding this I felt like it was me who came up with these idea's , with that being said i can relate to things written down here and if i put poetry in the middle i mostly likely would of came up with some of the same idea's. 3

Dear Kyshell: I dont really

Submitted by michaelg on Wed, 2011-10-26 11:14.

Dear Kyshell:

I dont really understand the poem but its interesting "Who Am I?" because its suppose to be about who you are but your not telling me anything. One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is:"In my dreams my name is ___"Because in a dream you never know its really a dream till you wake up,its unique in a way. Another sentence that I see was "Today my name is Mrs.F" which means your probably a wise age that they gave you such a name. Thanks for your writing. I look foward to seeing what you write next, because its unilike what ive read and interesting.

Dear Kyshell: I dont really

Submitted by michaelg on Wed, 2011-10-26 11:15.

Dear Kyshell:

I dont really understand the poem but its interesting "Who Am I?" because its suppose to be about who you are but your not telling me anything. One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is:"In my dreams my name is ___"Because in a dream you never know its really a dream till you wake up,its unique in a way. Another sentence that I see was "Today my name is Mrs.F" which means your probably a wise age that they gave you such a name. Thanks for your writing. I look foward to seeing what you write next, because its unilike what ive read and interesting.