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Who am I

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Oct 26, 2011
by: DonnieG

Donnie

Child of Veronica and Damon

Who loves my family, rapping, and being me

Who hates fake people and snitches

Who wants to go to Amsterdam

Who wishes he could of met Tupac/Biggie

Who is scared of anything more than 4 legs

Who dreams of getting rich

Who is determined to be successful

Who values my oportunities

Who is proud of my accomlishments

Who graduated from Livaudais Middle

Who lives in New Orleans

Donnie

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Nice

Submitted by chanteg on Thu, 2011-10-27 11:17.

Hey donnie,

  I really love your poem, especially the way you started. One sentence your wrote that stood out to me was, Who is scared of anything with more than four legs. It was a funny sentence because I would be scard of anything with morte than four legs as well. Another sentence that stood out to me was when you said, who hate fake people and snitches because so do I. I never really understand why people are so fake, and tell do dam much, but from these experiences of meeting them you learn who and who not to mess with. Thank you so much for writing. I look forward to your next post.Keep up the good work!Chante

Dear Donnie ; I like your

Submitted by michellea on Thu, 2011-10-27 12:39.

Dear Donnie ;

I like your poem . It's nice how you put that your proud of your accomplishments and you ARE determined to be successful .

 

 

- Michelle <3