Who am I
Donnie
Child of Veronica and Damon
Who loves my family, rapping, and being me
Who hates fake people and snitches
Who wants to go to Amsterdam
Who wishes he could of met Tupac/Biggie
Who is scared of anything more than 4 legs
Who dreams of getting rich
Who is determined to be successful
Who values my oportunities
Who is proud of my accomlishments
Who graduated from Livaudais Middle
Who lives in New Orleans
Donnie
Comments
Nice
Hey donnie,
I really love your poem, especially the way you started. One sentence your wrote that stood out to me was, Who is scared of anything with more than four legs. It was a funny sentence because I would be scard of anything with morte than four legs as well. Another sentence that stood out to me was when you said, who hate fake people and snitches because so do I. I never really understand why people are so fake, and tell do dam much, but from these experiences of meeting them you learn who and who not to mess with. Thank you so much for writing. I look forward to your next post.Keep up the good work!Chante
Dear Donnie ; I like your
Dear Donnie ;
I like your poem . It's nice how you put that your proud of your accomplishments and you ARE determined to be successful .
- Michelle <3