Without fresh food, no strong bodies
Recently in iMentor, we’ve been study where food comes from. At first l thought food is always the same, not matter where did you plant it. When l saw the movie, l heard the spearkers say that they like and enjoy their life on the farm. l know many people feel that the farm is good. After duing the study, we learn more about the food. for example, I heard that they like a teacher to explain to customers.
One thing l learn and l know for sure about is the farm. The fields are fresh and the air is also fresh. Now l’ve studied my share of environmental science, and l believe if there’s a good soil the you can plant a good food or vegetable. ldid some research on food picture, and l came across this one article food.
This article provided a lot of information and opinion on food. Some people felt that your fresh foods were good things and healthy. This movie, "Fresh" didn’t really surpise me at all that much, but it did make me fell bad. l like the fresh food and it makes our bodies get strong, so we are not weak to get sick. In another place in "Fresh," there was this one statement that made me agree with the reporter, "Food is life." This is so because food is this important to our life and body. If we don't get good food, then we have no strong bodies, and we can’t do most motions by ourselves. And that feels very bad.
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This post honestly feels so
This post honestly feels so unfinished. I liked the post in terms of the fact that it stayed on topic and that's pretty much it. The grammar wasn't too bad, as I was able to understand what was said it could have used some work. Also, it's very short and and I feel like there could be so much more detail in this post.
For example, what was your favorite part about it, what was your least favorite? I feel like you could have added more facts from the film as well. I feel like if someone read this and didn't know anything about the movie Fresh, all they would be able to understand from this post is that the movie is about farming when in my opinion, it's about so much more. It's about farming, the environment, how people impact their environment, organic vs conventional farming, if organic foods are healthier than conventionally grown foods, etc.
I wanted to ask, when you state "...l believe if there’s a good soil the you can plant a good food or vegetable." what do you mean by that? What to you is good soil and what is a good food or vegetable?
I feel that if you took the time to watch the movie over again and revised this essay, it could be a lot better.