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Yes That's Me

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Oct 26, 2011
by: TylerL
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Yes that's me

Look and you'll see

My hair is frizzy halo around my head

My eyes scanning for posibility

My arms reaching for experience

My hands clapping with delight

My heart filled with caring

I'm the one you can depend on

I never let you down

My friends call me a clown

I live to laugh

I hope to smile all day

I dream of jokes to say

It's all as clear as can be.

That's positively, absolutely me

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Dear Tyler, I liked your poem

Submitted by angelog on Wed, 2011-10-26 13:14.

Dear Tyler,

I liked your poem " Yes That's Me" because you wrote how you live your life and how you describe the type of person you are. One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is "

My heart filled with caring

I'm the one you can depend on

I never let you down" I think this is

Im gonna finish this tomorrow class is over