This class has been truly a blast. I love all the things we have learned and I definitely feel I have learned a good amount of things about Photography and Photoshop. I have learned so many interesting things about the way photography has come to be and all the different skills involved in photography. At first, I always thought photography was simply taking a picture, now I know all of the different traits of a photo that bring it to be what it is. This is what I have come to learn and feel is most important from what I have gathered from this great class.

   I contributed to the Youth Voices community by adding my own touch to the collecction of photos already online. I did this  by adding my own style. My special touch includes more subtly striking images that show more than some people might realize at first. When editing my photos I didn't really have trouble, and when writing my reflections on my images I found it easy to get what I was thinking across to my reader. I didn't realy think that I had much if any trouble when I was working on the many aspects of my projects. I wish that I could share my images in a way that more people would be able to understan the picture and the point that I was trying to get across better. However, I wouldn't want to have made it all too obvious to everyone. Overall, I think that I have done pretty well this year in developing my pictures into something that I hadn't imagined before.

See my photo stream at my Flickr page!

On Youth Voices, it's easy to post comments and share your photos, all you have to do is make simple discussion posts. You don't have to worry about people being disrespectful since it's a school website. Sometimes it's hard to leave comments for people that you don't know because you're worried about how you will sound. I sometimes worried when I left comments for people from other schools, but I think it was good and inspiring to see work from all around the US, from other schools in different cities. I think we all contribute to Youth Voices by posting our own discussions, about anything, and also by responding to other people's posts. I don't think there's anything I would want to do here that can't already be done, I think it's a good website and resource for schools to use.

-Coco.

 Youth voices is a great way to express your ideas and share it with the youth voices community. It also helps with new ideas because the discussions gives the reader new ideas to try in their future photographs..etc. I contribute to Youth voices by posting my discussions with what I've learned, this may enlighten someone who reads my post. I also post on the 'What's up' discussing what I've learned at the moment. Every post that is posted on Youth voices can help a reader try out new things or bring them onto that path. The ideas you post will be expanded, which will be helpful. I think the easiest on Youth Voices would be the writing because all you are doing is bringing your ideas into a discussion. It can also be challenging because there may be so much things running through your mind that you want to post, but you may not know how to state it in the discussion. Reading different discussions can help because they each contain ideas that you can also contribute to your ideas and expand on them. I wish people could post their comments on the discussions because you see that there are a lot of reads, but there aren't as much comments.

I think I contribute to the Youth Voices community by adding posts, and making comments. Making the posts are easy, because we have a specific format to follow, which is helpful. Commenting is a little more difficult, because it is sometimes hard to think of what to say, however, I know that I find comments helpful, so I try to comment on other people too. I wish that I could post more pictures, because they come out looking pretty good on this site, however, I haven't really worked on many others that I am satisfied with, so I would be unable to do that. Overall Youth Voices is a good site for what we are doing in class.

During my time visiting and using the Youth Voices website, I realized that I contributed a lot of my work. Every time we finished a project or editing a picture, we would write on Youth Voices and share our work with the whole environment. For example, we learned about famous artists and how their work connected to ours. Once we completed our research, we were ready to submit our final work to the Youth Voices website. 

A really easy task to do on Youth Voices is finding the post that you want to find. There is a search engine along with keywords so it's really easy. Joining a lot of groups and seeing posts in that group is also really helpful. I feel that having a lot of groups is really organized and having work stored in certain locations is quite easy. 

In my opinion, the hardest struggle that I encountered on Youth Voices would be finding all sorts of templates or forms that we had to use. This website is really organized yet it can be very confusing at some points. Overall, this website is easy to navigate and know your way around.

I contribute in the youth voices community by posting my work up and sharing it with everyone. This sparks new ideas and reactions in peoples minds which makes them comment and reflect on my work. I often comment on others peoples work which contributes to youth voices as well. I think that its easy to find a piece of work that is interesting to me becuase there is such a wide variety of work here. If I want basketball I can simply search it and will find media, reflections, art and many other pieces of work. I think it was sometimes hard to write thoughtful reflections because I never wanted them to be to long or the artists wouldn't respond. It was also hard at times to arrange the format of my work. I wish I could edit my work on Youthvoices and make it a photo editor/ a place to share my work online.

Throughout the year, I've used Youth Voices to publish the work I've done in my digital photography class in order to recieve feedback. I feel like I've contributed my point of view on what photography is by sharing the work that I've done. All of my work represents my outlook on the world and so by posting my images in Youth Voices, I've been sharing my view of the world with other students. It's easy for me to just post discussions here, but it's hard to get feedback from other people. I wish that there was a better way to interact with other students, like a wall to post comments on, just like Facebook. I feel like there should be a more personal aspect to Youth Voices. Sometimes it just feels like the stuff I post is going nowhere. I would be much happier if I were able to interact with other people more.

I attend East-West School of International Studies. Across the street from my school is Kissena Corridor Park but is commonly known as The Korean garden located in Flushing, NY. In my English class we have been going here a couple of times each week for the past few weeks, and we go to the plots that we have chosen and writie about what we see day by day. There are hundreds of plots in the garden and many different varieties of flowers there also.

I chose my plot because it looks pretty and has a lot of life to it. I say this because when I looked at some other plots, they had a lot of dead plants or none at all. When walking around it, one finds thirty-one bricks, it smell like old dog poo.

Over the past few weeks, I've been writing about a garden that is located within Kissena Corridor Park. The plot i chose is toward the back of the whole thing. There doesn't seem to be many people back there, it seems to be almost deserted like people gave up on it.

I think there is a lot of philosophy residing within the garden. A lot of deep thought that I could discuss here. As I was saying, my plot is very empty. I think the reason for that is that everybody can't be everywhere at the same time. You see, we seem to be needed in different places at every point in our life and it is impossible for everybody to take up all the space.

Let's take me for example. There are walls, one on each side of me and I can only go forward. There is only one narrow path that I can follow because the walls are so closed in that I can only move forward. This means that I don't have access to the rest of the earth or the rest of the space until my path leads me in to that unknown space. My plot is a symbol of space that has been used and that person has moved on.

 For the past four years, we have built a comfortable place in high school. We know what we're going to do the next day and who we're going to see. But once we finish these next four days all of this is going to change. Most of us are not going to live at home anymore, or go to school with same people we've seen since kindergarten. Now, we really don't know what the next day is going to bring. And this uncertainty brings up the question of whether or not our actions are predetermined. Are our lives controlled by fate? Or do we create our lives on our own? I like to think that we are fully in control, but how does that explain all the natural disasters, accidents, and other bad stuff that seems to happen to good people? We only have control over so much, but once we leave home, we have so much more control over our own lives. The fact that we are adults takes on a whole new meaning. We, not our parents, make decisions about the most basic part of our lives. And that's a little intimidating.

Over the past four years, as seniors it fair to say that we have all witnessed, or even taken part in behavior that everyone hates, and now as our highschool time is coming to an end I feel it is my duty to explain to underclassman how to not act like "noobs". Hopefully this practical advice will inspire some to not make the same mistakes most of us  have over the years. First and formost; while in a hallway/stairway always  take a second to preform a personal self check in which you ask yourself the following questions. 1.) Am I currently soliciting in a large group that is clearly constructing a hallway or a doorway? 2.) Am I standing idly by and watching the masses push their way through a half open door, or am I using my common sense to open the other side as well?. 3.) Am I flamboyantly hugging or kissing my boyfriend/girlfriend as the entire school watches me? 4.) Am I using my plastic sandwich bag as a food projectile stomp rocket? 5.) Am I obnoxiously loud or overly confident when I know I have my "wolf pack" behind me? 6.) Am I rude to people just because they are not my age?

 I can't even go all of First Semester without going to the Hospital.

As I write this, I'm being blinded by whites, browns, greens and yellows staring back at me from the window across the room while a soft breeze strangles me from an open window.  And I ponder on how to reflect on this year.

Summer's Gone, it's School again.
The old "Hello," the distanced friend.

I started the year off as any.  Hell, I ended the year as any. I started my mornings with KRCL 90.9, my evenings with the window rolled down.  I studied for tests and drew robots or something on my notes most, if not all of my classes.  I took photos of students playing Non-Dom.  I walked to my car everyday, hid my phone 'neath my leg in class, laughed, smiled, sighed, yawned.  It was all the exact same to me.  And even now, I still don't feel like I'm a Senior in High School, let alone a College Freshman. That might be a bad thing.

Fall is Here. It's still the same.
Purple Skies and Autumn Rain.

 I'm an agent on Evoke, and my work on Evoke over the past four weeks (weeks 4-7) has been boring because seriously all you do is write and honestly I'm tired of it. 

My Thoughts on Evoke

 A few weeks ago, I became an agent in a global network of social innovators. Urgent EVOKE: A Crash Course in Saving the World opened on March 3,2010. It's a world changing, fun, long, and a game all in one. It was designed and is directed by Jane Mcgonigal for the Wold Bank Institute.

A few weeks ago, I became an agent in a global network of social innovators. Urgent EVOKE: A Crash Course in Saving the World opened on March 3, 2010. It’s a game, a social network, and a lesson all in one. It was designed and is directed by McGanigall for the World Bank Institute.

WHAT IS EVOKE?

EVOKE has been open 3 weeks and already has more than 14,000 members. The game will last 10 weeks concluding on May 12th 2010, with a new quest and a new mission unlocked each week. In the first mission agents were asked to describe what type of person they were before they became agents.

The first thing I looked at was this 90-second trailer: EVOKE trailer from Alchemy on Vimeo. I thought the trailer was a little bit corny, but it got the point across well.

I like the way the story is presented, because it appeals to much younger kids, and people who enjoy playing games a lot.

A few weeks ago, I became an agent in a global network of social innovators. Urgent EVOKE: A Crash Course in Saving the World opened on March 3, 2010. It’s a game, a social network, a class, and a learning experience all in one. It was designed and is directed by Jane McGonigal for the World Bank Institute. How I found Evoke

EVOKE has been open for about 3 weeks and already has more than 13,832 members. The game will last ten weeks, concluding on May 12, 2010, with a new quest and a new mission unlocked each week. In the first mission agents were asked to imagine their selves in 10 years and what situation you would be when Alchemy calls you. 

Recently in english, we have been studying the earthquake in haiti. At first I thought that Haiti already had a robust government. I also had not realized all the negative influences/history that has helped to ruin this country. When I started watching videos on democracy now, thats when I realized that haiti has been raped and pillaged for its resources and I quote from one of the videos "has been used like a plantation". I know that many people feel that america has nothing to do with this and that they are just helping out and on top of that, they are the good guys in this. The truth is that they aren't, they are the ones that invaded the country, overthrew the government. On top of all of this, barack obama and bush and those guys are only giving money and trying to help out to show that they are interested in the country. I will quote from one of the videos again" its powerball money".

There is nothing in the way of my writing except maybe a bit of rambling from some of the other kids but that is normal. I can write a well thought out essay today. I have a bit of an issue that I am currently dealing with but that is not an impediment.

I know that i still Have A lot to write about regarding my topic and I am still trying to find some more answers cause my topic is collosal. I am trying to figure out where the human begins mentally and where he or she ends. We call ourselves human but.....what is the actual universal definition? This ties into existentialism as well as all other types of human philosophy.

Existentialism

Throughout my work, I feel as if I have advanced. Not particularly in the taking of photos but rather in editing them and making them seem more interesting. I also have learned how to use photoshop and how to edit my photos in them which allows me to create a whole other image from my original image sometimes. I have more fun now that I can do creative things with my photos beyond just taking them. My theme is graffiti, and I find this theme fun, interesting and easy, but not as a shortcut but rather Graffiti is the most art that I see daily throughout the city. I am able to understand graffiti better because some of my friends that are into it explain it really well to me and I feel as if I understand the art more. Maybe people don't think of Graffiti as art but I believe it is, just a different more realistic kind of art. It is not the type of art you will see in the MoMa but it makes the art seem more alive being on the streets and part of everyday life.

   So far, I covered my first goal pretty well.  My goal was to include both urban life and nature in my next photo, and I did that.  However, I need to work on my other goal a little bit better.  My goal was to include more nature this time and I haven't done that yet.  I would like to post a few more images that covers this goal.  As for the community, I have gotten fairly good responses.  A few people already made comments on my photos as well as left messages about my work.  Therefore, I have gotten good responses from the community however, I need to work on my goals a little bit more.

 In my photo discussions I had said that I had wanted to take some in the day, action pictures but I never did.  I think the reason that I did not is because when I take my photos I do not really think about what my goals are.  I just see something that would make a good photograph and I take it.  I think that for my next group of work I would like to change some things up and do what I actually wanted to do.  I had said that I wanted to take the same pictures in the daylight but I do not work that way in terms of taking photos.  

Digitally I think I am doing kay but not great.  I personally have done some commenting but not much.  As other people have done a lot.  I do not think many people have commented on my pictures but I do not mind.  I know that I am not the best photographer and it is okay if people do not love my work because I do not even know if I like my work

At the beginning of the year, my theme was life in New York City.  Recently, my theme has developed and concetrates more on artwork and people in NYC. So far, my photos have become a little more focused than my past photos.  Before, my work was in a more muted color and my photos have developed into a more specfic theme. From these photos it is evident the changes in my photos. (Photos listed recent to least recent)

 

Overall, i feel that i am doing good with my work.  I am taking many pictures and exploring many aspects of my theme (nature).  I feel that my photos have changed in appearence since the first day in this class.  In the begining of the year, my photos were really plain and 'lifeless', now they are striking and more clear.  Now my photos actually show my theme in a more clear way.  I feel that as the year goes on my photos will be even more better than they are today because I will learn more techniques to make them look even more striking!  

I feel that my photos can relate to many other photographers pictures.  I think this because as i browsed through Flickr and Youth Voices group i came across many photographers that took striking photos. 

Being the winter season is just around the corner, I think that my photographs taken in this time will depict another side of nature in New York City.  

I think I am doing fairly well with my work. In my first picture I wanted to capture the aspect of a single moment and I felt that I did that well. In my second picture I wanted to focus on a certain player. I think I couldv'e done a better job on making the center of attention more capturing. I think I am doing well in the community of discussion. I am getting alot of feedback and getting to see alot of photography. As I look through the different photographs tooken by various photographers, it gives me alot of new ideas. The comments which are left, help me know what I should work on for my next picture. I feel that I did a good job on my discussion posts.

From my first picture to my second picture (that I posted a discussion to) I felt that I accomplished my goal. My goal was to use more color in my pictures and experiment with photoshop even more. However, when I looked at my second picture and my third picture I felt that I did not accomplish my goal of making subtle changes to photoshop. I feel like I new to change my theme because I am focusing too much on contrast (which is my theme) and less about making my pictures better each time. My new goal is to fine tune my pictures and change my theme.

 

How am I doing?

Well it has to be deep and substatial, you definitely cannot just have one sentence posts. That does not even remotely make sense. It definitely has to be something I care about. I am very interested in high order thinking and unconventional thought so that has to be incorporated into the following post. The post really has to stand out for me, i mean usually i can respond to the most banal of posts but a post that I really like has to have the criteria of being different. I honestly could care less if there is to much writing, as a matter of fact..the more the merrier. It benefits them cause then that means a longer comment and i know people love getting comments..i know i do.

I am exploring reflections. I am interested in this because I took a picture of a doors window one day and the effect that it produced intrigued me. It looked like an overlap and somewhat confusing almost as if you couldn't tell what was real and what was merely a reflection.

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My daughter is going to college. I asked her to write about how she feels about this time. I did the same.

 

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