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Dear 12maldonadoc, I think

Submitted by tmonteiro on Wed, 12/02/2009 - 3:27pm.

Dear 12maldonadoc,

I think you are right about teens being sexually active now in days. I mean there are a lot of teens that loose their virginity at a early age and they are happy. Now in days there are a lot of sex going on and they don't care about the consequence of their sex. We now in days have teens getting pregnant and screwing up there life cause of one mistake. Ugh.

One sentence that stood out to me was  "Is it because that we are being talked about sex that teens have decided to start doing it?  Should we have been told about it? Yes we should be talked about it, but we shouldnt do it until we are at a certain age or until we are married.  I feel i can blame parents for this.  They are not really on top of their children like they should be.   Sometimes they are giving them too much freedom and their children are taking advantage of it." I mean the parents should trust their kids but they should also teach them the consequences of having sex because they could have sex and screw up there lives over one mistake.

One sentence that stood out to me was "It angers me though to know that such young kids that should be playing with toys and stuff are starting to do adult things.  I don't know why they are doing it; is it like a game to them? Does it make them cooler to say "Oh i had sex."? " Yea. You are so right. I mean before everytime someone would say sex someone would say eww. Now every one says it as if its something cool when it is not.

I had a friend who was sexually active and she had sex when she was 13 and she had sex with different guys. I mean I feel bad fo her because her mom doesn't help her. Her mom knows she does this and is scared of trying to control her daughter so thats why I find sexually active kids to be to free. They should wait until they are married.

Thanks for writing I look forward to reading more and more.