I am proud with your essay “Living with Catholics”because I loved the way you explain about Gary Soto live.What he was doing in his live.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is “In Living Up The Street Gary Soto talks about his life as a boy and his family and how they lived on Bradley Street.”I think this is a strong sentence because you explain what the book was about.Also I loved when you said that the book was about his life as a kid.
I remember being told, "You can't be an actor or a musician." I never paid attention to those people that said I could never achieve my goals, or live my dream. My father also told me, "If you want something, you'll have to work your ass off for it." I knew that if I gave myself 100% to my dreams, I could live them.