I am proud with your essay “Living with Catholics”because I loved the way you explain about Gary Soto live.What he was doing in his live.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is “In Living Up The Street Gary Soto talks about his life as a boy and his family and how they lived on Bradley Street.”I think this is a strong sentence because you explain what the book was about.Also I loved when you said that the book was about his life as a kid.
In living up the street up the street it talks about a boy and his family and how they lived and how in the back of his days and how he was growing up.
because it states that sister mare walked up another row, still tapping her pencil and talking about The school he was getting bullied by other students.also sister Marie's corner did not care for the children sixth chapter of living up the street by Gary Soto was about when he went to a Catholic s
hunger when she pointed to me. and Gary well he would be one of the first to die so to me it looks like she don't care about him.
Now that I have made a map about living up the street by Gary Soto ,I am noticing that Gary Soto has a sister and a brother. They live in Bradly street in Fresno. Also one day the police was looking for his uncle Leonard because the had a fight in a bar. Also his brother and his sister was playing in the backyard ,they were pretending that the cherry tomatoes sane on his shirt.
Chapter four, "Looking for Work," in Gary Soto's Living Up the Street is interesting. Chango turns 9 years old. Chango's mom was hitting him. She is mean. I like when Gary says, "For weeks I had drunk kool aid and watched morning reruns of Father Knows Best whose family was so uncomplicated in its routine that i very much wanted to imitate it."
Hi my name is Betsy. I have a smaller brother named Bryan. My family is from Mexico. I love dogs they are my favorite animals. My favorite thing to do is to be with my best friends. I was born here in New York City.My best friends are Crystal and Gizella.My favorite hobbies are to read books and to see t.v alot. My favorite place to be is to be in school.I love my past and I am going to tell you somethings of why I like my past.First of all one thing that I like about my past is all the adventures Ive been through. For example the first time I went to Mexico.It was so scary at first but after the first time i loved being in Mexico.Another thing when my brother was born. I was so happy because he is the only sibling I've ever had.Those are only two but there is more things about me.